Development: Second Draft

To develop my second draft from my first I need to make it much more graphic based and think of the pages as one instead of them separated. To do this I have to join the 2 page together to make then one and then work on them. I also have use elements in this draft like pen and paper to give it a reality feel.

However I still needed to develop this draft, so I sat down with Miss Stower and went

 through each page and she told me what I needed to improve upon. This is the outcome:

Page 1:

Look at some old books and take the idea and add to my front cover

Page 2/3:

Add some text to make it more interesting 

Page 4/5:

Add a “…” to the end

Add a boarder to “Jazz it up”

Page 6/7:

Clean up the cutting around the lens

Make typography more interesting

Change the background 

Page 8/9:

Change background

Page 10/11:

Change background on name of creatures 

Page 12/13:

Change colour of white line paper

Make money fall on paper

Page 14/15:

Clean up paper clips

Make pencil bigger

Page 16/17:

Make picture bigger to fill negative space 

Page 18/19: 

Add something to it (text)

Page 20:

Look at some old books and take the idea and add to my back cover. 

All of this helped me to improve the final draft.

Development: Textures and Images

From my first draft I learn that just drawing and text did not work, I needed some other elements like paper, pencils, photo and backgrounds. So for all of the elements in my second draft I hunted down and either scanned in to the computer or  took photos of and upload them to my computer. 

From getting all of my textures and images I then worked with them in photoshop to get the look I was after, take the eyes for instants (see below) I took the photo and then worked it in photoshop by marking the brown bit of my eye out and turning them into fire, then making all of the face, apart for the eyes black and white. 

So for all of this I have learned how is customise my work, how to edit and change photos, use  textures and images to enhance my work and give it another feel.

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