To develop my second draft from my first I need to make it much more graphic based and think of the pages as one instead of them separated. To do this I have to join the 2 page together to make then one and then work on them. I also have use elements in this draft like pen and paper to give it a reality feel.
However I still needed to develop this draft, so I sat down with Miss Stower and went
through each page and she told me what I needed to improve upon. This is the outcome:
Page 1:
Look at some old books and take the idea and add to my front cover
Page 2/3:
Add some text to make it more interesting
Page 4/5:
Add a “…” to the end
Add a boarder to “Jazz it up”
Page 6/7:
Clean up the cutting around the lens
Make typography more interesting
Change the background
Page 8/9:
Change background
Page 10/11:
Change background on name of creatures
Page 12/13:
Change colour of white line paper
Make money fall on paper
Page 14/15:
Clean up paper clips
Make pencil bigger
Page 16/17:
Make picture bigger to fill negative space
Page 18/19:
Add something to it (text)
Page 20:
Look at some old books and take the idea and add to my back cover.
All of this helped me to improve the final draft.
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